FEEDBACK ON PRESENTATION (DAY 3)

Veronica:

                    Has an initial idea for major project. Has started major project (has a few sketches but no final pieces yet). Thirty one blog posts with research and major plan sketches and ideas. Website is ready for major project upload and publishing. Needs more research into footwear designers related to her major project.

Presentation was clear enough to be understood. Major project idea was clear and precise.

Moyo:

              Initial ideas and target mark are specific and clear. Has research on artists related to her major project. Has sketches for major project but not final piece yet. Twenty three blog posts. No final piece yet but getting there. Website is ready for uploading and publishing, plans on posting six final pieces on blog. Has a logo for website.

Presentation was good, clear and understandable, I find the major project plan interesting and clear.

Parneet:

                  Initial ideas are understandable. Has three final pieces already uploaded on the blog but aims at six final pieces. Has color palette. Blog contains research on  artists related to major project. Has 23 blog posts - 21 have been posted and 2 are draft. Has logo on website. Website is ready for publishing once all sketches of major project have been transformed into final pieces.

Presentation was understandable. Major project needs more research but she has gone quite far in production of major project.